Thursday, August 17, 2006

Fob in Mono
(a poem)

Melyngoch has been taken back to her secular world
Tolkien Boy has bid Provo farewell
Editorgirl is with her family
Doing something.

Edgy is taking his mother-in-law out for dinner
Marchioness is working
And the rest
Don't count.

So
I
Fob
Alone.

4 Comments:

Blogger B.G. Christensen said...

Constructive criticism is welcome. Deconstructive criticism will be deleted.

8/17/2006 8:01 PM  
Blogger Tolkien Boy said...

Did you criticize your writing for any of the usual reasons, seeing as how it was just you, or did you branch out and give yourself a smiley dinosaur?

8/17/2006 9:43 PM  
Blogger Kari said...

The rest don't count??? Owwwwww...

8/18/2006 12:31 AM  
Blogger Th. said...

.

Aiiieeeee!

8/22/2006 5:38 PM  

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